Good feedback on my short film script

Got a nice critique from a short film screenplay competition script reader this week on my project “The Strange Untried.” [This screenplay is available for option or sale.]

This is a fun script to read; with compelling characters and strong dialogue, there are many elements of this script that stand out as unique. From Æbbe’s best friend being his chicken, to the conversation he has with a potato, to his struggles with painting—there’s so much packed into this short film that is worth exploring.